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WingedRivers Divine

Joined: 08 Mar 2008 Posts: 151
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Posted: Mon Apr 21, 2008 6:45 am Post subject: |
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(...thanks for that info? If you're curious (which you probably are) I used to be a cutter, so I decided to make Melbourne one.)
Randy balked, "ugh, Asian? That shit's freaky man. I saw this one where this old lady got hammered by all of these young guys. It was SICK... Don't know why I kept watching it." He laughed.
Brutis looked at Frey with a grin, "yeah, I agree. Full of himself 'n shit. But yeah, there's a creepy kid and a retarded kid. Be mindful."
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Opt Out Divine

Joined: 03 Mar 2008 Posts: 110
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Posted: Mon Apr 21, 2008 7:55 am Post subject: |
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[It seems like I meet a lot of people who were once like that or play characters like that. No, I didn't even think about it. It just always reminds me of when I saw my friend's wrist and asked her about it. I poke myself with needles and normal stuff like that. Erm anyway, it seems like there are a lot of Europeans who don't much like us.]
Ricky shrugged. "They were a lot more open about that kind of stuff and honestly they don't really have..." He stopped there. "Some pretty messed up stuff. That's for sure. Eccentric tastes really... Well I'm done eating. You?"
Frey shook his head. "He's not retarded, he's dickless. Anyway, so the other kid isn't here? I think I should go deal with him. I'm not so worried about push-over, dickless little girls as I am creeps ya see?"
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WingedRivers Divine

Joined: 08 Mar 2008 Posts: 151
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Posted: Wed Apr 23, 2008 2:20 am Post subject: |
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(Actually, Melbourne is the first character I've done that with. XD Everyone else is pretty "normal" in terms of self-esteem. He's really the first one I've tried with a poor self-esteem, but really cares for others. He hates his body and how skinny it is and vives to be somewhat normal looking like other healthy teenagers.)
Randy stared at him. Ricky was odd at times. "Yeah, just about. I wonder what we're gonna do first?" he asked no one in particular.
Mel sighed as he stared at the bathroom floor. He had to go back out into the public... He really, really didn't want to though. Being outed out on the first day.
'Stupid Randy,' he griped in his head, gripping his right wrist and wincing a bit at the pain. It felt incredibly soothing.
Brutis laughed at this, "hey, leave him to me. He's my turf, got it? You can have the dickless one and your weirdo friend Shin and the nice one." He jerked a thumb at Lylia.
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Opt Out Divine

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Posted: Wed Apr 23, 2008 9:27 am Post subject: |
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Ricky put a hand on his stomach. "I hope we don't do too much." He looked around, thinking about how many younger kids were here. Were they going to mix the activities. He sighed, "Do you think we'll have to deal with the little kids?"
Mylo stayed up by the kitchen's tray return. He wasn't really into talking about porn. He was as sexually interested as the next guy, he just found it an awkward topic out in the cafeteria... and with Randy and Ricky. They sounded like they could get along fine without him. That reminded him, where had that Mel kid gone? Did he get sick and head to the loo? Mylo shuffled his feet, wondering if he should go check. The kid was one of his cabin mates, did that mean anything?
"He called you a weirdo, Shin." Frey said to Shin.
Shin shrugged. "I came close to calling him names. I don't think he likes me much."
Frey shook his head, as if Shin hadn't even bothered answering him he turned his attention back to Brutis. "I don't want to get close to the dickless one. He's a diseased lil' bastard- feel sorry for him." Frey winced, looked at Lylia and winced again. He muttered something to himself and rubbed his arms.
"Frey..." Lylia began. She noted that maybe Brutis didn't know her name, but Frey was acting problematic.
"Turf my ass, this jerk off." He snickered, seemingly to himself. He glared at Brutis. "I'm done eating." He determined and walked away.
"Get your tra..." Lylia began to say, but he wasn't going towards the buffet or towards his tray. He was leaving the building...
"I'll deal with him later. Let's just pretend we don't know him for now." Shin said with a sigh. He took a drink, like he was kicking back scotch. Lylia sighed, resigned to the fact, as she had been several times before, that Frey was beyond her reach.
Ricky-Slateblue
Mylo-Darkblue
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WingedRivers Divine

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Posted: Thu Apr 24, 2008 3:12 am Post subject: |
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"Nope, we won't," Randy shook his head as he finally finished off his food. "They do shit on one side of the lake while we get to have our fun on the other."
Melbourne sighed a bit as he stood up and exited the stall. His wrist hurt with a dull pain, but it was a soothing punishment. Rinsing his hands in the sink, he briefly thought to rinse off his blade, then thought better of it. Someone might come on in and see him with it...
Brutis sighed at all of his as he rolled his eyes. For fuck's sake it was as if he wasn't even there. Second strike, third one he was finding new people to hang out with. He just sat at his seat with a bored look on his face, eyes scanning over everyone. People were having fun talking to each other.
'Screw the third strike,' he thought as he stood up with his tray. "See ya," he said dismissingly, leaving the table to dump his tray and go find some interesting kids who weren't full of the crazy.
Asavare finally returned to the table, cheerfully sitting beside the slightly distraught Valmir. She didn't take any notice, however, as the girls immediately informed her as to what just transpired. Asavare squeed happily at hearing this and hugged Valmir's head to her bosom.
"Already making friends Valmir, such joy!"
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Opt Out Divine

Joined: 03 Mar 2008 Posts: 110
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Posted: Thu Apr 24, 2008 9:52 am Post subject: |
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[Gah, this post got ubber long and then the forum f'ed up on me. Grr]
Ricky sighed with played out relief. "Thank goodness. I don't want to have to deal with a bunch of little buggers, you know what I mean?" Ricky smiled. "Though man, listen, I do sometimes find those little girls kind of cute. And not like in a really perverted way." Ricky said, blushing a little as he admitted to it.
Mylo had begun to return to the other two, but stopped mid stride, noticing he'd spilled some pop or something on the back of his hand. He licked it, finding it sweet. Geez, how could he miss something like that. He looked down at his clothes to see if he'd gotten any on him. Indeed, whatever it was, probably pop, he'd gotten a little on his shirt too. “I didn't think I was that messy.” He muttered to himself and headed for the restrooms.
Lylia was glad for Brutis' company. Dealing with Shin and Frey could be quite tiring. She was closer to Shin originally. She thought of trying to stir up some conversation, but it looked like Brutis was tired of them, or, like any sane person, had had it with them. “Oh, wait.” Lylia began, trying to get up and bumping her leg on the table. She winced in pain. “Shin, why do you have to be such a snob and with Frey being so psycho?”
“You knew what we were like, Lylia. Frey's just looking for excuses and I'm judgmental.”
“You don't have to be such a snob.” She said, getting up from the table carefully this time.
Shin sighed, he wasn't very excitable at the moment, it was like it was all he could do to balance out Frey's insanity. “Remember last year when our school had that... stupid little first dance thing?” He glanced at her, she nodded. “I asked you to it.”
“I remember.” She frowned. “You didn't show up.”
“I did actually, I just avoided you. I went early and joined up with another group of kids. We left early.” He told.
She flushed a little. “Frey told me... you'd gotten sick or something.”
“You were willing to believe that? Naïve.” He sighed. “I guess even Frey knows he needs someone around to watch his back.”
“Why would you tell me this now?” Lylia asked, looking around for Brutis.
“Lylia, I don't think well of anyone, really. I stood you up on purpose. You weren't good enough to hang out with. I didn't want to be seen with the likes of you.”
“And what's so bad about me?” Lylia asked, she wanted to sound harsh, but it came off pitiful.
He shrugged. “You're too innocent. Too childish. You're like the girl everyone thinks is gullible and stupid.”
She took in a deep breath, looking as if she was about to be offended. Actually Shin had said worse to her before, about other people. She would've been a fool not to suspect it. She thought a few times he would talk behind her back. He did. Shin was like that. “I'm not surprised.” She said, gaining an air of snobbishness herself. She picked up her tray and began to leave.
“I don't know what's wrong with me. It's like there's no one in the world I can really care about.”
She tensed hearing that, mostly because it seemed to ring true. Shin was odd, he could reserve judgment until he knew someone, then it was an iron fist. “You know why I wasn't mad at you? I got the impression you might have stood me up...” She told. She looked over her shoulder, it didn't look like Shin was listening, but he half the time he didn't seem like he was listening. “Frey came and told me you wouldn't be coming and you know what? He stayed there with me, the whole night. It didn't turn out half bad, he actually tried to dance with me and all.”
Shin looked at her with wide eyes when she said that. He must've been drugged out of his mind- Shin really wanted to say that. “That doesn't sound like him.” He said instead, in an accusing voice, as if to call her liar.
“I kind of wondered if it was him... But Frey can care about people if he wants to.” She snickered.
“You know he might be one of the few people I kinda of give a care about, but.... Sometimes I really hate his guts.” Shin snickered, he ruffled his hair with his right hand and looked away from Lylia. This news seemed to bother him. He couldn't tell if she was lying and he didn't trust her to be honest, but even the idea that Frey could be more likable than him, more human, pissed him off.
Lylia let Shin have his little fit and went to the tray check in. She was an honest enough person and maybe she made Frey sound too generous in that scenario, but he had come. She stood by the tray window feeling a little teary over the memory and feeling terrible lonely suddenly...
Terrence didn't have any reason to leave the cabin... He really didn't, it had become cozy to him. He liked having the bathroom so close and with his snacks and a water bottle he was set for the night. Okay... he was getting hungry pretty quick and had had... a moment. He wasn't sure what to call his sudden panic attack. He'd come out of the bathroom and suddenly felt like he had to rearrange everyone's stuff. Anything that was out of a bag had been rearranged (by color or alphabetical order) and the bags had been moved to the corners, one bag for a corner... Of course they were still in their owner's “area”.
This only happened every once in a while- this re-arranging thing... when Tak got particularly nervous... He was groggy from having fallen asleep again. He'd probably been sleeping too much. He began to get worried over the fact that maybe everyone would noticed he'd moved their stuff around. He couldn't remember where everything had been... Tak got off his bed and sat down on the floor to stuffed his duffel bag under his bed. He still had on the clothes he was wearing when he arrived. He didn't have on his shoes now or his jacket. His socked feet barely peeked from the ridiculously long legs of his pants. The pants that were so long he walked on them and had to have a belt to keep them on.
He got up off the floor and looked at himself in a mirror (assuming they had at least one). His hair never seemed to change or act too crazy. Somehow it's wavy texture actually tamed it. Well, no, that wasn't the case all the time... He brushed his hands through his hair a few times. It didn't change much, maybe made the waviness worse. He shook his head; no one would see him anyway. Everyone was still eating at the cafeteria. Camps usually had Jello didn't they? For dessert or something. He was craving Jello, actually anything sweet.
Tak opened the door and stepped out. The afternoon was fast approaching (?). It was nice, a chill had entered the air. The combination made him feel kind of renewed, or at least awake.
He walked off the porch and looked in the sky for stars. He heard something crunch next to him and suddenly wondered if he could have attracted a bear.
[I changed Lylia's color to mediumseagreen. Some of these colors are so obscure I have to keep notes, lol. Wow, I'm kind of surprised with the direction Shin, Frey and Lylia are taking. I was planning to make them more like filler characters with bland, stereotypical personalities. I was just gonna play Frey as a little bit of a punk and Shin like mister normal and Lylia like the tomboy. She's turning out to be kind of sweet, Shin's an ass and Frey's crazy.
I'm surprised, because I didn't think I had a good grasp on Mylo and Ricky, but they've developed the least. I think Mylo especially. He seems kind of bland to me. He looks all fancy, but man, he IS kind of bland.
Terrence needed some love, I left him out for two pages. His interaction with Frey is kind of funny. But it's open for interference too. ]
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WingedRivers Divine

Joined: 08 Mar 2008 Posts: 151
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Posted: Thu Apr 24, 2008 7:48 pm Post subject: |
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(I like Mylo, he's nice and is, what's the word... Mellow? Yeah, that's the one. Lylia's nice too, but Shin gets on my nerves. Frey's just... Frey. *laughs*
*reads Shin's and Lylia's post* HE'S SUCH AN ASSHOLE!! *wants to throttle the little prick* Fuck man! Even Randy's got more sense!! XD)
Randy laughed, slapping at his back, "naw, I know what you're sayin'. Good to look at, but don't fuckin' touch, y'know? Otherwise police would loooooove to keep us in the bunker for along while." His grin turned a bit sour. "Yeah, my old man got it good last year..."
Melbourne didn't look at himself in the mirror, always hating how he appeared as he turned to exit the bathroom. He blinked when he saw Mylo, holding the door open for him.
"Hey," he found himself saying, looking off to the side. It still embarassed him that Randy had outed him in front of Mylo and Ricky.
Brutis grinned as he sat beside some guys, joining in on their conversation. The group didn't mind Brutis, as several of them had been to the camp last year as well.
Finally, normal talk and no one to fuckin' be a snob, Brutis thought as he laughed along with one of the guys.
(I think you meant to type that the evening was fast approaching, right?)
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Opt Out Divine

Joined: 03 Mar 2008 Posts: 110
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Posted: Thu Apr 24, 2008 11:25 pm Post subject: |
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[The characters I'm playing Frey off of have no idea how to interact properly. They're not completely inhuman though. I have something of a picture, it's actually of Frey's major archetype character that he more or less comes from. link It's not a great picture, but I did the original last year and edited this one yesterday, so I'm all ubber proud of how the edit came out. Lol. He has the hardest time with relationships, gets bored pretty quick and will eventually flip out if there's no conflict.
I think I need to develop Lylia's character a bit more so she isn't such a push over. I began to write a flashback of her night with Frey, but decided it was too long to post. Mylo is kind of boring me. He's mellow I guess, but he's not very interesting. I guess he's a good balancer though. Shin's really turning out to be evil. I think he's coming from an archetype-slum character though. He's cold and stuck up... I want to develop his character more into something interesting.
I feel like I'm having a harder time getting to know your quiet characters. Especially Valmir. Brutis actually seems to have decency though and Randy is kind of funny. Ricky tries to get along with everyone.]
Ricky nodded. "I think the untouchable element makes them kind of idol like you know?" His smiled faded when Randy mentioned his dad. "Your dad...?"
Mylo was on his way into the bathroom when Melbourne came out. He actually hadn't been holding the door for him, but held it now that he saw him there. "Oh, hey, so this is where you were. You feelin' alright?" Mylo wondered, he hadn't noticed Mel's arm yet.
Shin was stuck alone and had two trays that needed to go up, but Lylia was still standing there. Why couldn't she act like a normal girl and go to the bathroom when she wanted to cry? He got up with a sigh. Taking his own tray and Frey's up to the return. "Don't stand here and sob about it." He looked down at Frey's tray. "Why don't you go over and apologize to Brutis for me and Frey, since that's all you're good at."
"Leave me alone Shin." Lylia snapped and shoved her tray into Frey's, it made a splash and got on Shin's shirt.
"Geez. Bitch." He snickered and headed for the bathroom.
Lylia, on the other hand, stalked away and spotted where Brutis had sat down. She didn't sit down in the midst of the boys, but sat at the end of the table, as if she'd been wandering around aimlessly and needed a place to sit. Her face got all splotchy red when she got upset. She hoped she didn't look too red.
[Frey and Terrence have a fairly long interaction, so I think I'll put their part in a separate post. Originally I had it say evening, but I recalled Randy was wondering what they were going to do first and I didn't know what time they were suppose to have arrived, so I changed it. It's evening though, yeah?]
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Opt Out Divine

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Posted: Thu Apr 24, 2008 11:54 pm Post subject: |
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Frey remembered where he and Lylia had waited for Shin before dinner and thus thought he could work his way back and check the cabins in the general area for a lone kid who looked sick. He was doing quite a bit of work, leaving the cafeteria and coming out here to find some creepy kid. He stopped in his tracks and sighed at himself. What was he thinking? Being by himself seemed to restore some sanity or perhaps his meds were kicking in.
He'd made his way back to where they'd waited and looked towards the closest cabins. There was a single kid standing out there and staring at the sky. Frey looked the kid up and down. He was wearing really odd clothing, the thing that mostly stuck out to Frey was the ugly T-shirt. The kid had his arms all folded in from of him as if he were praying, but it looked like he was just cold. His knees were also kind of fallen in towards each other. Was this the kid Frey was looking for? Was this kid even a guy? What kind of guy posed like that, even when he was cold? There was something really off about this him... He sauntered over, not really caring about the noise he made on his way over.
Terrence saw that it was a person- not a bear (yay?). His pose changed suddenly as if this were a larger threat than a bear. He spread his legs in a power-stance position and let his arms drop. He looked like he was ready to take up a boxing position. “Uh, hey there.” He said carefully. He didn't like how this person was approaching him so purposefully. What was going on?
Frey stopped a few meters away when the boy addressed him. “Are you in this cabin?” He asked, pointing to the one nearest to them.
Tak glared. “No, I won't answer your question until you say 'hello'.”
“Hello?” Frey wondered.
“Hello.” Tak greeted. “Yes, I'm in this cabin. Are you?”
Frey was a little thrown by that, realizing he'd accidentally complied. He brushed his black hair over his shoulder and stroke it, sort of curling the ends as he did. “You don't even know who's in your cabin?”
“I know.” Tak snapped. “What do you want?” He asked, going straight to the point. This guy was interrupting his stargazing.
“Nothing.” Frey replied as if he'd been attacked with the question. “I'm just looking for a creep. Are you the creep?” He asked, walking closer.
“I'm not nearly as creepy as you are.”
“I think you're the creep.”
Tak took a step back, not liking how this was going, or how this guy was talking. Was he crazy? “Look if you're trying to play a prank on me...”
“I wouldn't joke about freaks.”
Tak suddenly thought he knew what this guy was talking about. His eyes began to tear up and a rock seemed to float up into his throat. “How...” He began choked. “How do you know?”
Frey was surprised to see that he'd struck on something. He tried to keep his surprise under wraps as he approached. He got wind of an odd smell. Where had he smelt that smell before? It was trying to rile up a memory. He stood only a person's width away from Tak and too close for most people's personal space. Tak didn't seem to be moving away now, he was shaking and making a hiccuping sound. Er wait, he was crying? Frey raised an eyebrow and bent over to get a look at Tak's face. What the hell? Frey couldn't beat up some kid who was sobbing hiccups. He laughed a little. “You have the hiccups or something?”
Tak couldn't help it. “Don't mock me.” He whined. “'uck of-f, okay?” He asked, shivering a bit and turning back around, headed for his cabin. So much for stars...
“Hey, stupid, I don't know what fucking secret you're talking about. I was just told you're a creep and you're... you're just some emo?” Frey demanded. Tak continued towards the cabin and up the porch. Frey was use to getting attention this way and didn't like being ignored. “Hey...” Frey snickered, hurrying up to the boy before he could react. He grabbed the creep's arm with one hand and with the other punched him in the shoulder.
“Ah!” Tak winced. Why was this kid bullying him? He jerked away and rubbed his should. “Leave me alone.” He whined. “You ruined my night.”
Frey looked up to the sky as if to check if it was night. “Hey Venus.” He said seeing a red star in the distance. Tak looked up and saw the red star he was looking at.
“Venus isn't red.” Tak argued and suddenly he was sobbing louder than usual. Frey felt like maybe he would get in trouble for this. He put a hand on Tak's arm and took a deep sigh. That smell... He jerked Tak towards him and stiffed the boy. “What the-- ARE you doing!?” Tak asked, so shocked he was unable to curse properly.
“You smell funny.” Frey said, backing off after he was sure of it. “Like a hospital or something, kind of like blood or something.”
“I've been sleeping a lot...” Noted Tak.
Frey's eyes were darting back and forth for a few seconds. He then stared straight at Tak's crotch and after a moment that made Tak uncomfortable. Frey pointed at Terrence's crotch. “You have a dick?” He asked.
Terrence turned around and paced into the cabin. He wasn't answering that! Frey followed him in, sniffing the air as he did so. Tak fell down on his bed before he saw that Frey had followed him. He lay there, still for a moment, then turned a furious gaze on the intruder. “What's your name?” He asked sitting up.
“Why?” Frey demanded.
“Because I'm reporting you!” Tak said. Frey grinned, this kid didn't know how to do that.
“Name for a name.” Frey said.
“Hurry it up.”
Frey wasn't use to anyone telling him to do that. “I don't have to tell you.” He hissed annoyed.
“I'm Terrence. Does that help?” Tak wondered. Frey nodded.
“Terrence hu?” He turned for the door. “Alright, I'll leave you for now.”
“Hey, a name for a name?”
“Tsk...” Was Frey's reply as he left the cabin.
“Venus!” Tak yelled. Frey heard him, being just outside the door. Did that kid just call him Venus?
He reopened the door and peered in at Terrence. Terrence glanced at him then fell over on his bed. “Don't you think Adonis would work better?”
“Adonis?” Tak muttered and put a pillow over his face.
“Yeah, Adonis. I'll respond to that.” Frey smirked. Tak didn't respond and Frey continued to grin as he left the “boy” alone.
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WingedRivers Divine

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Posted: Fri Apr 25, 2008 4:19 am Post subject: |
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(The one thing with Valmir is that he's one of those guys who doesn't have a selfish thought of themselves. My little cousin is like this. He has no real opinion on much and usually does what the crowd does.
As for Melbourne, he's just socially awkward. Once he gets to know you, he's more open.)
"Pfft, idol like..." Randy laughed a bit as he shook his head. He glanced at Ricky and shrugged. "Catch a Predator. That's all I'm gonna say..."
(Ah, crap, I meant that Mel was holding the door open for Mylo)
Melbourne was wearing long sleeves, so his cuts were never visible. He shrugged a little bit, moving out of the way for Mylo.
"Yeah, I feel alright..." he said. He didn't move yet. Mylo was at least nice, unlike his dumb ass friend and dumb ass Randy...
Brutis noted her and felt kinda bad. Her face looked a bit red and she seemed down in the dumps.
"Yeah, I can't wait 'til we start playing some basketball," one kid said. Brutis grinned, agreeing and deciding to use this to let Lylia in on their conversation.
"It's totally fun, the instructor used to be an Olympian or something. You like basketball, right?" he turned to Lylia with a grin. A few of the other guys looked over, waiting for her answer.
(Mrow, it's mid-afternoon or whatnot. But this place is in a valley, so in a few hours it'll be like dusk. Aaaaaaaaand so either Tak is actually a girl or Tak has female parts instead of male parts.
XD If he has female parts instead of male parts... I'm gonna laugh so hard 'cause I had a character like that! He's long since retired, 'cause, well, I hate him. He was such a snobby bitch uke, always getting mad over the stupidest shit and constantly getting raped... It was like UGH. I shudder now when I look back at how I first started out Rping with him. I mean, GAWD, I even did Mpreg with him. MPREG. Do you know how stupid I was when I was a kid?! *headdeskery is had* Man, WTF was I smoking when I made him?! I had named him Kaiyn too... WTF STUPID ASS NAME FOR A STUPID ASS CHARACTER. *hugs Melbourne and her normal characters tightly* If you can't tell, I vehemently hated how I Rped when I was younger. DX )
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Posted: Fri Apr 25, 2008 7:50 am Post subject: |
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Ricky nodded. "So should we take our trays up? You done?" He looked towards the tray return. "Where did Mylo go and for that matter, your friend, uh... Mel?" Ricky wondered.
(It's fine. It doesn't matter.)
Mylo carefully passed Mel. He showed Mel his hand. "I spilled some pop on myself." He laughed a little. "I'm a clutz I guess."
Lylia turned her attention to the boys, talking about basket ball. She blushed a little that Brutis was talking to her. "Yeah, I really like basket ball. I would've gone to a camp, but I busted my knee." She said. "I should be able to play a little though. Do you think we'll get to play some?"
[:mutter: Not "instead". He has both reproductive organs. His urethra is in his penis though. How to explain... boobless-yaoi-futanari. He's supposedly a part of a human reproductive hermaphrodite project. Only three of the subjects supposedly survived, Terrence being one of them. I was writing a story about one of the others and wondering how people would respond to it. I assumed bad, I guess I'll see now hu?]
[I don't like MPREG, I never have. I think it's weird, unless it's a seahorse, I guess I can't say anything there. Frey thinks Tak is a girl. You've read ASN yeah? In case you miss it Tak isn't exactly like the MC in ASN.
My past characters were more extreme in personality than Frey, he's probably pretty close though. I've just started playing BL rpgs. One of my past crazy ass catboy characters jumped out on someone else's character naked, a she. It was funny, because he was just trying to piss someone off and did a good job of it. I had so much fun with him, because he could pull off romantic and stuff if he wanted to. He was wild. I would hope my characters have calmed down a little and my writing isn't so absurd. I had some really unreal/unbelievable characters...]
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WingedRivers Divine

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(Bu-But it does matter! Holding doors open is SOOOO important! XD *kidding*
But no, never read ASN and it looks scary. Like... transgendered scary. O_O)
Randy shrugged as he stood up, "dunno, probably off to slice at himself or whatever since I outed him. Egh, that guys needs to grow a backbone or something..." Randy sighed as he began to head over to the garbage.
Melbourne smiled a little, "well, everyone's a klutz once in a while I guess..." He didn't know if he should follow Mylo in to continue the conversation or head back the table... Mylo seemed a lot nicer than the other two devils.
Brutis nodded, "'course. Matter of fact, wouldn't be surprised if we got to play some today."
"Yeah, so you were good? Maybe you can be on our team," another boy, who was defintely more girl-crazy than Brutis, grinned at Lylia.
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[No, not transgender, it would be along the lines of hermaphrodite. Transgender and intersex are not the same thing. The main MC in ASN, I think his name is Machiro or something (I collect the manga) is "half" male and "half" female. His top is male and bottom half is female. In other words, she's a very masculine female. :Si-gh: This isn't going well at all, no not at all. Least in Terrence's sake.]
Ricky thought that was a derogatory statement about Melbourne. "Oh, is he like emo or something?" Ricky asked as they took their trays up.
"Yeah, I guess." Mylo nodded and finally made his way over to the sinks. He washed his hands then got a paper towel for his shirt. "So uh, you done eating?"
"Excuse me." Shin said to the older boy who was holding the door of the men's restroom open. What was he doing? Shin sighed as he looked at the damage to his shirt in the mirror. There were spots of red spaghetti sauce on his shirt. Geez.
Lylia shrugged. "I guess I'm okay. I like to play, but I'm not the best on the team or anything." She said with a smile, not really noticing the guy was anything, but friendly.
Frey was almost back to the cafeteria when he realized he was being followed. He wasn't sure why he was going back, but figured he ought to find Shin or Lylia. He stopped in his tracks when he realized he was being followed. "You're following me, faggot?" He snickered, a little bit from surprised.
"I'm hungry." Terrence told, thinking maybe he'd just been called a maggot. That seemed like a pretty weak insult. "You know that was Mars right? I mean if anything that was probably Mars." Tak called.
Frey cocked his head at the "boy". "Do you think you should be walking around smelling like that?"
Tak put his nose into his armpit and sniffed. "What? Old Spice?"
Frey shook his head, "No, blood. What's a girl doing wearing Old Spice?" He asked.
"I'm not a girl, you think I'm a girl?" Tak thought about that. "And I don't smell that strongly of blood. You're like a dog if you can smell that."
"I suppose, since I'm a ninja, I have a keen sense of smell." Frey told.
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Tak shook his head. "Do you just say whatever comes into your head?"
Frey smirked and nodded. "You're a little late for food you know." He said, curling his fingers into him palm in a come here motion.
"What?"
"You want to walk in alone and clueless?" Frey wondered. Tak supposed he had a point, but he didn't really want to be associated with anyone either. "If you're just walking in now people will think..."
"You think people will notice me?" Tak asked, that sounded horrible. Maybe he should look for some back way in.
"No." Frey said. Tak came up close to him and grabbed onto his sleeve nervously. "Okay, if you do that they will." Frey pulled away and walked on in. Tak was clearly nervous now and kept close to Frey. Once inside Frey spotted where Lylia was, for some reason she’d separated from Brutis and where was Shin. He motioned for Tak to follow him and try to lay low.
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WingedRivers Divine

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(Dude, just 'cause I don't like it doesn't mean it isn't going well. XD You're funny.)
"Nah, emos are posers. Patterson actually cuts himself," Randy said, trailing his finger across his top right wrist. "It's real gross. Can't understand why Sadie doesn't try to talk him out of it..." He shrugged, sounding bored with the convo.
Melbourne hung out by the door, glad for the invite to keep the conversation going.
"Yeah, just waiting to see what we'll do... there'll probably be a bonfire or something," he said. Melbourne nodded a bit to Shin as he passed him.
Brutis shrugged at that, "eh, well, I'm not that good either."
"Good, then we won't put you on our team," one of the boys said and the guys started to laugh as Brutis grinned at them.
"Your loss!" he laughed.
(Heh, Frey has a pet dog. XD )
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Opt Out Divine

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[.....No...... Well, it's fine...]
Ricky thought that's what emos did and didn't understand Randy's definition or difference. He wouldn't pester Randy about it though. "O-oh, yeah.... That's probably painful."
Mylo smiled at Shin, but the boy seemed preoccupied. "It would be nice to have a bond fire. Get some people and their guitars together." It didn't take him long to finish cleaning off his shirt. He didn't try very hard.
Shin, on the other hand, was focused on cleaning his shirt and letting it dry before he left the bathroom.
Lylia laughed along with them. It would be nice to play some, but it did make her miss the basketball camp a little.
Terrence was walking a little ahead of Frey now. Frey seemed a little standoffish. "What's with you?" Tak wondered, wasn't this kid kind of a punk or something?
"You go ahead." Frey said, seeing that Terrence was going to walk right past the girl's table with that one shy, dickless kid.
Terrence walked on past the table and looked back down where Frey was standing. What was wrong? He figured maybe the other boy had seen a friend or something. He watched Frey lean up against the wall and seem to wait.
Frey tried to ignore the fact that Tak was watching him and trying to figure what he was doing. At length Tak walked back over to Frey. "What are you doing?" He looked around and it clicked. "Ah, what have you done?"
As if to answer him Frey looked up at the table of girl. Tak followed his line of sight and raised an eyebrow.
[I don't like dogs.]
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